The animation and artstyle are pretty good, but I'm not too big a fan of the story style or the character designs.
I mean, you pretty much just made a trashy anime. Very good work overall though.
It's just not my thing.

Good shit big boy.
Gave me some good nostalgic vibes.

Great. Everywhere you look there's always something funny going on.
I wish people would stop using that background music, but it works still.

If anything could be improved, I would say the last part was perhaps unnecessary.
I've never made any comedy sketches/animations or anything, but something I constantly hear
is to "leave them laughing". As a VIEWER, it's still humorous, but in the wake of something more extreme like Dan's stabbing Brad when psychicpebbles does his expertly screeched gibberish, it's a little underwhelming.
The last laugh is important to my subconscious I think.

Overall, though, from the animation, voice acting, and overall artstyle, this is really great.
Also noticed that tankman.
Will rewatch several times.